Here’s the problem with doing a PiBoIdMo blog post at the end of the month:
I was going to write about setting. But Tammi did that.
I was going to doodle. But Debbie already did that.
I was going to send you an Inspiration Fairy. But Courtney already sent you one.
I thought about chicken nuggets. But so did Sudipta.
So, what’s left?
Endings! Big, bold, surprising, clever, tender, awww-inspiring endings!
As we ease into the final stretch of PiBoIdMo, like you, I have a list of ideas. Some I’ve even started writing. But none of them have endings. (Yet.)
Many of us experience the first flush of excitement when a new idea tickles us until we have to put words down on paper. We have an idea! A character! A setting! Maybe we even have conflict! But, if you’re like me, you hope that by the time you hit the 700 word mark the ending will just write itself. But here’s the problem with endings that just write themselves. They’re usually flat.
And no wonder. A great ending is as difficult to write as an opening sentence. And as important.
Here’s what’s on an ending’s “to do list”:
- An ending has to resolve the story problem in a satisfying way (no plot points still hanging);
- It has to have the main character solving the conflict by the last page;
- It should either be predictable enough to emotionally resonate with the reader or unpredictable enough to delight;
- If it’s a humorous picture book it needs to deliver the final punch line;
- And, like a fine wine (or peanut butter fluffernutter sandwich), it needs to linger on your reader’s palette long after the meal in consumed.
So let’s think of how we can use page 32 to offer the perfect ending to your story.
Here are some possibilities:
Surprise Ending
Think beyond the obvious ending and offer the reader a surprise – the opposite of what’s expected. It should still be logical, but it doesn’t have to be inevitable. Emma Dodd does that in “What Pet to Get” as does Cynthia Rylant in “The Old Woman Who Named Things.” Both offer surprise endings but do so in very different ways.
Circular Ending
In my picture book OSKAR’S PERFECT PRESENT (2013), Oskar starts his journey looking for the perfect present for his mother. On the first page, he finds it—a perfect rose! But as Oskar makes subsequent trades along his journey home, he is left without a present. On the last page, however, he is reunited with the same rose he traded away at the start of his journey. Circular endings—or those that somehow mirror the opening—are among my favorite endings since they offer closure in an often clever way.
Fulfillment
Sometimes a last page is simply the climax of the story, the fulfillment of the character’s desire. In “When Marion Sang”, Pam Munoz Ryan’s book about opera singer Marion Andresen, Marion is denied to sing on many American stages because she was African American. The last page of the story reads, “. . .and Marian sang.” In my picture book THE BUSY LIFE OF ERNESTINE BUCKMEISTER, Ernestine is the queen of over-scheduled set, and she just wants to play. In the end, she does just that and the final words, “And sometimes she just played,” underscore that Ernestine is fulfilled.
Wordless
And ending can be wordless, relying on a single-spread illustration to close the story. While the ending is wordless, it still needs to be “written” within the visual. This type of ending can be used effectively in both quiet books and humorous
For someone who struggled with what to offer, you came up with a very satisfying solution. Thanks so much for the list and examples of different types of perfect endings.
Oh my, this was good. Thank you for reminding us that crafting a good beginning isn’t “the end” of it.
Thank you Lynn & Linda for your comments! I’ve also learned so much this month for everyone <3
Linda, you hit the nail on the head for me. The endings are the hardest part! I wonder if perhaps I haven’t worked the form hard enough in this area. Thank you for laying out a road map to follow on rewrite after rewrite, after rewrite…
Endings are my favorite, I’d like to experiment more with circular endings. Thanks for the inspiration!
Endings are so difficult! I always end up revising them more than any other part of my stories. I suppose that’s apropos since a great ending is what makes people want to start from the beginning again and read the story over.
Thanks for a great post!
Thanks Wendy, Catherine & Julie — ends are so difficult, aren’t they? I find it so interesting how playig around with different endings can change the whole story. It’s a real challenge, isn’t it?
I love endings, but they aren’t always easy. Liked the idea of the circular ending. Thank you for addressing this subject. Very helpful.
I’ve always believed that it’s the ending that makes you want to experience the beginning all over again. Fantastic information and inspiration, Linda…like a fine dessert following the end of a fabulous meal – SWEET! Thanks so much for sharing with us, “sis”! Love & hugs, Jodi
Thanks, Jodi! Funny how we both think of endings in terms of food — LOL!